- From: Christian de Sainte Marie <csma@ilog.fr>
- Date: Tue, 15 Apr 2008 13:56:37 +0200
- To: RIF WG <public-rif-wg@w3.org>
Harold, Here a couple comments on BLD, most of them minor. I reviewed the draft dated April 7, but checked that my comments still applied to the current version. I did not read others' comments yet, so my remarks may be redundant. - Sect. 1 - Overview: the paragraph that start with "One important fragment of RIF is called the Condition Language" seems to be a leftover of yonder. With BLD being BLD and not Core anymore, and with FLD defining the syntactic framework, I believe that that paragraph is, at best, confusing and, at worst, wrong. It should be removed; - same section: RIF-RLF is referenced twice as the "RIF framework": to avoid confusion, it should always be qualified ("RIF framework for logic dialects"); - same section: "for the benefit of those who desire a quicker path to RIF-BLD and are not interested in the extensibility issues". maybe we could say seomthing about this spec being more directly useful for the implementers of BLD? - section 2.2: Equality, class membership, subclass and frame terms allow only simple, positional and named-argument terms where individuals are expected: shouldn't external terms be allowed as well? - section 2.4, "Rule implication: If φ is an well-formed": correct to "\phi is _a_ well-formed"; - sction 2.5.1, 2nd sentence ("It is intended to be a common part of a number of RIF dialects, including RIF PRD."): same as my first comment. I thing that sentence should be removed; - section 2.5.2, "For convenient reference, we reproduce the condition language part of the EBNF below": is that really useful? The EBNF for the condition language is about one page earlier only... - same section, production for Group says (RULE | Group)*, and text says that a "Group contains any number of RULES": is it intentional to allow empty groups? - sect. 5.1: "This section defines the precise relationship between the syntax of RIF-BLD and the syntactic framework of RIF-FLD." That's the presentation syntax of RIF-BLD, right? That should be precised; - Sect. 5.1, item 5, 2nd bullet, 1st bullet: "In particular, unlike in RIF-FLD, a variable is not an atomic formula in RIF-BLD." It is not so much "unlike in RIF-FLD" than a specialisation of RIF-FLD (the point is that BLD and FLD are not comparable, one being a dialect and the other a framework). CHeers, Christian
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