- From: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>
- Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2002 18:55:34 +0000
- To: RDF Core <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org>
Suggestions for things for consistency across the docs that the
Series Editor - Brian - might want to consider:
1) The phrasing, order and titles of the documents at the start of
all the RDF specs, usually in the Introduction section (as Frank raised).
For example:
http://ilrt.org/discovery/2001/07/rdf-syntax-grammar/#section-Introduction
which I seem to have in a random order; I can't recall how I
picked that one. Or in the latest primer draft:
http://www.w3.org/2001/09/rdfprimer/rdf-primer-20021027.html#intro
We really need the new model theory doc title if it is changing
Pat: Is it something like RDF Formal Semantics: Model Theory ?
Maybe also consider if this list should be in all documents?
2) The [RDF-SEMANTICS] reference labels to use
In particular I'm trying to use the new title
"RDF Vocabulary ..." [RDF-VOCABULARY] etc. rather than emphasis
the schema word.
3) The acknowledgements section with respect to current/former WG members.
I offer my shorter version of the concepts doc section (last two
paragraphs):
http://ilrt.org/discovery/2001/07/rdf-syntax-grammar/#section-Acknowledgments
More trivially:
4) Example code block styles
I think primer and syntax are mostly in alignment here since they
we use the same style. I tend to give each one a label, link to
it and have files that can be clicked / downloaded / validated
particularly for complete examples.
5) Figure colo(u)r schemes
If we cared, so that the nodes and arcs were similar. However
Pat's pictures are so pretty, I don't want him to change them ;)
I had a comment that the black-on-red nodes I used was bad
contrast and a bit difficult to read, especially when printed.
Maybe the black-on-green nodes also has this problem?
Cheers
Dave
Received on Monday, 28 October 2002 13:57:31 UTC