- From: pat hayes <phayes@ai.uwf.edu>
- Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2002 10:43:30 -0600
- To: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>
- Cc: w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org, bwm@hplb.hpl.hp.com
>Suggestions for things for consistency across the docs that the >Series Editor - Brian - might want to consider: > >1) The phrasing, order and titles of the documents at the start of > all the RDF specs, usually in the Introduction section (as Frank raised). > > For example: > >http://ilrt.org/discovery/2001/07/rdf-syntax-grammar/#section-Introduction > which I seem to have in a random order; I can't recall how I > picked that one. Or in the latest primer draft: > http://www.w3.org/2001/09/rdfprimer/rdf-primer-20021027.html#intro > > We really need the new model theory doc title if it is changing > > Pat: Is it something like RDF Formal Semantics: Model Theory ? No, lets just make it "RDF Semantics", or "RDF Formal Semantics" if people prefer. I'll let Brian choose. > > Maybe also consider if this list should be in all documents? > > >2) The [RDF-SEMANTICS] reference labels to use > > In particular I'm trying to use the new title > "RDF Vocabulary ..." [RDF-VOCABULARY] etc. rather than emphasis > the schema word. > > >3) The acknowledgements section with respect to current/former WG members. > > I offer my shorter version of the concepts doc section (last two > paragraphs): > > >http://ilrt.org/discovery/2001/07/rdf-syntax-grammar/#section-Acknowledgments > >More trivially: > >4) Example code block styles > > I think primer and syntax are mostly in alignment here since they > we use the same style. I tend to give each one a label, link to > it and have files that can be clicked / downloaded / validated > particularly for complete examples. > > >5) Figure colo(u)r schemes > > If we cared, so that the nodes and arcs were similar. However > Pat's pictures are so pretty, I don't want him to change them ;) > > I had a comment that the black-on-red nodes I used was bad > contrast and a bit difficult to read, especially when printed. Toning down the red to pinkish will probably fix that. > Maybe the black-on-green nodes also has this problem? > >Cheers > >Dave -- --------------------------------------------------------------------- IHMC (850)434 8903 home 40 South Alcaniz St. (850)202 4416 office Pensacola (850)202 4440 fax FL 32501 (850)291 0667 cell phayes@ai.uwf.edu http://www.coginst.uwf.edu/~phayes s.pam@ai.uwf.edu for spam
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