- From: Jonathan Marsh <jmarsh@microsoft.com>
- Date: Fri, 20 May 2005 20:44:00 -0700
- To: "David Booth" <dbooth@w3.org>
- Cc: <public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org>
Thank you for your comment - we tracked this as a Last Call comment LC115 [1]. The Working Group referred this to the editors for incorporation. If we don't hear otherwise within two weeks, we will assume this satisfies your concern. [1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/desc/4/lc-issues/issues.html#LC115 > -----Original Message----- > From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-desc- > comments-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of David Booth > Sent: Friday, March 25, 2005 1:16 PM > To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org > Cc: Bjoern Hoehrmann; www-qa@w3.org; Dan Connolly > Subject: Re: a WSDL whatsit? (conformance terminology) > > > Some afterthoughts: > > Section 8.1 is the one that defines (or will define, once the > editorial > changes are complete) a "conforming WSDL 2.0 document". (We currently > use the term "WSDL document" in a number of places in the spec, so > these > also need to be changed to "conforming WSDL 2.0 document". Or perhaps > we should just make the term be "WSDL 2.0 document", to be slightly > briefer.) > > It occurs to me that it would also make sense to move Part 1 section > 8.1 > to the beginning of the spec, so that the reader can begin with the > overall understanding of what constitutes a conformant WSDL 2.0 > document > (which is what section 8.1 defines), and then drill down as the spec > is > read. > > I suggest moving section 8.1 immediately after section 1.1, so that > section 1 would proceed as follows: > 1.1 says what WSDL is all about (no change); > 1.2 (formerly 8.1) says what consitutes a conformant WSDL 2.0 > document; > 1.3 (formerly 1.2) says what it means (no change); > 1.4 (formerly 1.3) defines notational conventions (no change). > > > On Tue, 2005-03-22 at 16:18, Dan Connolly wrote: > > On Tue, 2005-03-22 at 15:23 +0100, Bjoern Hoehrmann wrote: > > > * Dan Connolly wrote: > > > >p.p.s. I thought I saw a "define your terms" bit in SpecGL, > > > >but I don't see it. > > > > > > http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-qaframe-spec-20041122/#define-terms- > section > > > > Ah... thanks. > > > > And I see that my comment is redundant w.r.t. Dom's earlier comments > > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-desc- > comments/2004Aug/0000.html > > > > to which the WSD WG replied... > > > > "We agreed to add a definition of WSDL Document as a > wsdl:definitions > > element and its descendents." > > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-desc- > comments/2004Sep/0030.html > > > > > > That seems pretty good. I look forward to a new draft so I can check > > it in context. > -- > > David Booth > W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard >
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