- From: Rain Michaels <rainb@google.com>
- Date: Mon, 22 Feb 2021 06:27:18 -0800
- To: Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com>
- Cc: "Pascalides, Justine E" <JPascalides@ets.org>, public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAJO5Hus+SDnV_mN=n1jHaT2rx5i3rzxRQ2RY_vTzzV9Ffc4ucQ@mail.gmail.com>
Thank you so much for sharing this, Justine! My apologies for taking a few days to reply. My thoughts/notes: *Ensure processed do not rely on memory *still needs work - It doesn't match the aesthetic style of the others and stands out as odd - It doesn't actually follow the mockup we decided on (with the stickies inside of the thought bubble) - It isn't very clear because it is a lot of visual information in a tiny space, especially with all of the details of the brain - Is there a reason not to use the one that I mocked up instead (option B <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRoYev1aAIHhIq37Itt96ueBwLh5zXMUeJBYxL0MCkQ/edit#>)? The originating art that I pulled together was sourced from nounproject, so it would be simple to credit. If we feel that one is also still a bit cluttered, I can work on it a bit more to give it more breathing space and clarity *Provide support for different ways to understand content* is confusing and aesthetically jarring. I realize this one was agreed on well before I became involved, but I'd like to suggest that I take a stab at coming up with a less confusing option. I've looked at previous iterations from the "older versions" document, and don't have a good creative solution yet, but am happy to make this an action item today or tomorrow. *Help users understand with clear text and images*: I can live with this one as it is, but I think we can do better. The icon feels unbalanced, and to me looks like it is proposing a long blob of text rather than short manageable chunks. I can also take on an action item to mock up a couple suggested alternatives on this one if that seems helpful. Finally, looking at this layout, and thinking about our actual recommendations, I'd like to propose that we make a layout change. I've added a suggestion to the bottom of the document you shared <https://docs.google.com/document/d/11MvYiuuCLb03tlg6aE_pXqE3WxA8M2eCcs75L5s9ZpI/edit#> . Rain On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 6:04 AM Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com> wrote: > Fantastic job, Thanks so much! > > some small comments > > 1. Can the use and avoid (good and bad) icons be separated? > > The icons for Ensure processes do not rely on memory and Ensure processes > do not rely on memory seem less clear then we thought they would. Can the > artists take another look at them? Two suggestions: > > - Help users understand what things are and how to use them - maybe > we need lass of the hand and more of the other elements? > - Maybe if the outline for the memory icon was clearer > > All the best > > Lisa > > > > On Thu, Feb 18, 2021 at 10:10 PM Pascalides, Justine E < > JPascalides@ets.org> wrote: > >> Hello, >> >> >> >> The latest icons are now available on Google docs (link below). Is >> everyone comfortable with the current state? I’ve inserted the icons into >> the Summary text to give a clear representation of how they will appear in >> Content Usable. >> >> >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/11MvYiuuCLb03tlg6aE_pXqE3WxA8M2eCcs75L5s9ZpI/edit >> >> >> >> Justine >> >> >> >> >> >> Justine Pascalides >> >> Technology, Accessibility, and Innovation >> >> ETS | Assessment and Learning Technology Development >> >> Ph: 609-683-2213 <(609)%20683-2213> | Email: jpascalides@ets.org >> >> >> >> ------------------------------ >> >> This e-mail and any files transmitted with it may contain privileged or >> confidential information. It is solely for use by the individual for whom >> it is intended, even if addressed incorrectly. If you received this e-mail >> in error, please notify the sender; do not disclose, copy, distribute, or >> take any action in reliance on the contents of this information; and delete >> it from your system. Any other use of this e-mail is prohibited. >> >> Thank you for your compliance. >> ------------------------------ >> >
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