- From: Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com>
- Date: Tue, 23 Feb 2021 17:37:34 +0200
- To: Rain Michaels <rainb@google.com>
- Cc: "Pascalides, Justine E" <JPascalides@ets.org>, public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAKExBMJTe3R63PcSVFUAvNd==6XYxCRWqAsMtdR3TD0mOGEkXg@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Rain Can you make a mock up for Help users understand with clear text and images? On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM Rain Michaels <rainb@google.com> wrote: > Thank you so much for sharing this, Justine! My apologies for taking a few > days to reply. > > My thoughts/notes: > > *Ensure processed do not rely on memory *still needs work > > - It doesn't match the aesthetic style of the others and stands out as > odd > - It doesn't actually follow the mockup we decided on (with the > stickies inside of the thought bubble) > - It isn't very clear because it is a lot of visual information in a > tiny space, especially with all of the details of the brain > - Is there a reason not to use the one that I mocked up instead (option > B > <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRoYev1aAIHhIq37Itt96ueBwLh5zXMUeJBYxL0MCkQ/edit#>)? > The originating art that I pulled together was sourced from nounproject, so > it would be simple to credit. If we feel that one is also still a bit > cluttered, I can work on it a bit more to give it more breathing space and > clarity > > *Provide support for different ways to understand content* is confusing > and aesthetically jarring. I realize this one was agreed on well before I > became involved, but I'd like to suggest that I take a stab at coming up > with a less confusing option. I've looked at previous iterations from the > "older versions" document, and don't have a good creative solution yet, but > am happy to make this an action item today or tomorrow. > > *Help users understand with clear text and images*: I can live with this > one as it is, but I think we can do better. The icon feels unbalanced, and > to me looks like it is proposing a long blob of text rather than short > manageable chunks. I can also take on an action item to mock up a couple > suggested alternatives on this one if that seems helpful. > > Finally, looking at this layout, and thinking about our actual > recommendations, I'd like to propose that we make a layout change. I've > added a suggestion to the bottom of the document you shared > <https://docs.google.com/document/d/11MvYiuuCLb03tlg6aE_pXqE3WxA8M2eCcs75L5s9ZpI/edit#> > . > > Rain > > > > > On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 6:04 AM Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Fantastic job, Thanks so much! >> >> some small comments >> >> 1. Can the use and avoid (good and bad) icons be separated? >> >> The icons for Ensure processes do not rely on memory and Ensure >> processes do not rely on memory seem less clear then we thought they >> would. Can the artists take another look at them? Two suggestions: >> >> - Help users understand what things are and how to use them - maybe >> we need lass of the hand and more of the other elements? >> - Maybe if the outline for the memory icon was clearer >> >> All the best >> >> Lisa >> >> >> >> On Thu, Feb 18, 2021 at 10:10 PM Pascalides, Justine E < >> JPascalides@ets.org> wrote: >> >>> Hello, >>> >>> >>> >>> The latest icons are now available on Google docs (link below). Is >>> everyone comfortable with the current state? I’ve inserted the icons into >>> the Summary text to give a clear representation of how they will appear in >>> Content Usable. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/11MvYiuuCLb03tlg6aE_pXqE3WxA8M2eCcs75L5s9ZpI/edit >>> >>> >>> >>> Justine >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Justine Pascalides >>> >>> Technology, Accessibility, and Innovation >>> >>> ETS | Assessment and Learning Technology Development >>> >>> Ph: 609-683-2213 <(609)%20683-2213> | Email: jpascalides@ets.org >>> >>> >>> >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> This e-mail and any files transmitted with it may contain privileged or >>> confidential information. It is solely for use by the individual for whom >>> it is intended, even if addressed incorrectly. If you received this e-mail >>> in error, please notify the sender; do not disclose, copy, distribute, or >>> take any action in reliance on the contents of this information; and delete >>> it from your system. Any other use of this e-mail is prohibited. >>> >>> Thank you for your compliance. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>
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