- From: Stefan Schumacher <stefan@duckflight.de>
- Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2001 21:13:21 +0100
- To: reagle@w3.org
- CC: xml-encryption@w3.org
Hello, I´m translating the WD XML Enc Req at the moment, and have a few suggestions. A copy and paste from "my-errata" follows. --- Numbering: now, for example: 3. Requirements 1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax like in other specifications or the core spec: 3. Requirements 3.1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax It would be easier to navigate in the document. --- Section 2, 1. The XML ... : is now: represent a digitally encrypted Web resource better? represent a digitally encrypted resource --- I´m still at the beginning of the translation, maybe there´s more to come. Hope, it helps. Best regards, Stefan -- Stefan Schumacher Oesterberg 20 0172/2718968 58553 Halver 02353/130119 Germany www.schumacher-netz.de
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