Re: Comments XML Enc Req 20011018, numbering

On Sunday 11 November 2001 15:13, Stefan Schumacher wrote:
> like in other specifications or the core spec:
> 3. Requirements
> 3.1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax

Since there were so many of these, I rely upon the natural numbering from 
an order list, instead of manual numbering and indenting. Slightly 
troublesome but worthwhile I think.

> Section 2, 1. The XML ... :
> is now:
> represent a digitally encrypted Web resource
> better?
> represent a digitally encrypted resource

I'm inclined to continue with "Web resource" since that's the sort of 
terminology we use elsewhere...


Joseph Reagle Jr.       
W3C Policy Analyst      
IETF/W3C XML-Signature Co-Chair
W3C XML Encryption Chair

Received on Tuesday, 13 November 2001 17:46:32 UTC