Re: Comments XML Enc Req 20011018, numbering

On Sunday 11 November 2001 15:13, Stefan Schumacher wrote:
> like in other specifications or the core spec:
>
> 3. Requirements
> 3.1. Encryption Data Model and Syntax

Since there were so many of these, I rely upon the natural numbering from 
an order list, instead of manual numbering and indenting. Slightly 
troublesome but worthwhile I think.

> Section 2, 1. The XML ... :
>
> is now:
> represent a digitally encrypted Web resource
>
> better?
> represent a digitally encrypted resource

I'm inclined to continue with "Web resource" since that's the sort of 
terminology we use elsewhere...

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