Re: [css-round-display] Miscellaneous suggestions

Another 2 observations:

1) on section 6, there is a note that reads as:
"In the polar coordinate system, a point is described as being(?) a
certain distance from the pole and a certain angle from the polar axis."

It fails to describe what a pole is (as also the 'being' use is a bit
strange). What if we rephrase it to:
"In the polar coordinate system, a 'pole' is the reference point and
points are described as been a certain distance from it, as also a certain
angle from the polar axis."

2) The Section title reads as:
"Positioning content *by* using *the* polar coordinate system"

Maybe it could be just:
"Content positioning using polar coordinate system"



Adenilson Cavalcanti

Received on Wednesday, 21 October 2015 19:38:43 UTC