- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 8 Feb 2001 00:42:21 -0800
- To: www-style@w3.org
Here are very minor comments for your CSS Mobile Profile 1.0 Last Call Working Draft [1], to use or not, as you see fit. In Status of this document, W3C organizations and maturity levels can be capitalized as they are in the Process document: working group -> Working Group, last call -> Last Call, style activity -> Style Activity, working draft -> Working Draft. (see http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/) RFC 2119 can be a reference, and section 2 could say: "...The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in [RFC2119]." If you don't want to use the RFC, then those words need definitions. (see http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt) HTML Tidy (or another tool) with indentation off will remove leading spaces in the source. This will reduce the file size by about 10%. (see http://www.w3.org/People/Raggett/tidy/) From here down, a section number is followed by a quote and then a suggestion. TOC 6. (the heading is right) and 6. list item 2 Inheritence Inheritance 1. par. 1 Cascading Style Sheets, level 2 (CSS2) specification Cascading Style Sheets, level 2 (CSS2) specification [CSS2] (Link the first occurrence.) 1. last par. needs an ending period. 2. list item 5 and 5. list item 6 HTML 4.0 [HTML40] HTML 4.01 [HTML4] and the former needs a link [<a href="#ref-html4">HTML4</a>] 3. par. 1 In addition to these selectors, [I am trying to find a good place to state the obvious in prose, that the selectors and properties marked "Yes" are in the mobile profile. This might be the place?] In addition to the selectors marked "Yes" in the CSS Mobile column, 3. E (i.e., and element of type E) (i.e., an element of type E) 3. E F descendent (twice) descendant Though both spellings are correct, CSS1 and CSS2 use the second. (see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS2/selector.html#descendant-selectors) 3. E:lang(c) The :lang() pseudo-classe The :lang() pseudo-class 3. div.warning The same as div[class!="warning"] The same as div[class="warning"] 4. 'list-style-type' upper-alpha ,none upper-alpha, none 7. par. 1 stylesheets style sheets A. CSS2 et.al. et al. A. CSS1 17 December 1996, revised 11 January 1999 A. CSS1 http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS1-961217.html http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-CSS1 A. [HTML4] "HTML 4.0 Specification" HTML 4.01 Specification In A., all three references can say they are W3C Recommendations. Also, the titles should be links. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-css-mobile-20010129/ Best wishes for your project, -- Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
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