- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 15 Feb 2011 09:23:23 +0100
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- CC: Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>, Liam McGee <liam.mcgee@communis.co.uk>, Emmanuelle Gutiérrez y Restrepo <emmanuelle@sidar.org>, Jennifer Sutton <jsuttondc@gmail.com>, kate.roberts@hta.org.uk, sarah-hart <s@sarah-hart.com>, Wayne Dick <wed@csulb.edu>, Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>, Ian Pouncey <w3c@ipouncey.co.uk>, Sandi Wassmer <sandi@copious.co.uk>, Helle Bjarnø <jor@servicestyrelsen.dk>, wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Shawn, Sandi, All, I love how this flyer is coming along! A couple of notes: #1. Heading "Include. Enable. Innovate" - There seems to be a slight mismatch in tense? It reads like action for the reader whereas it actually describes accessibility. Maybe should be something more like "Access. Inclusion. Innovation" or "Access: Inclusion and Innovation" or such? #2. Content of section "Include. Enable. Innovate" - The bulleted list seems repetitive and not as grabbing as the title. Are "diverse users" different from "people with disabilities"? Who are "diverse users"? Here is a suggestion for dismantling: [[ Web accessibility is about ensuring equal access for <bold>people with disabilities</bold> and provides benefits for everyone, including: - Improved usability and user experience - Access by mobile, TV, and other devices - People in rural areas and other contexts - Cost saving and improved search ranking ]] #3. [very minor] Sentence "The WAI is part ..." - Is "The" necessary here? #4. [very minor] Sentence "... foundations of all accessible websites are built ..." - Is "accessible" necessary here? #5. List "WAI Guidelines" - "Web Designers, Developers and Content Creators" -> "Web Designers, Developers and Content Authors" - "Web Application Designers, Developers and Authors" -> "Web Application Designers, Developers and Programmers" - "Browser Vendors" -> "Browser and Browser-Extension Developers" - "Web Authoring Tool Creators" -> "Web Authoring Tool Producers and Procurers" #6. Sentence "For everything you need to know ..." - Really "everything"? I wish it were so but needs confirmation... ;) Best, Shadi On 14.2.2011 21:48, Shawn Henry wrote: > EOWG, > > Sandi's latest draft of WAI flyer content is online at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/flyer/flyer2011c > > We'll be looking at this in a couple of WAI meetings this week and will > have some tweaks. The latest draft will always be at: > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/flyer/flyer2011 > > If you have comments, please send them asap to [w3c-wai-eo@w3.org OR > wai-eo-editors@w3.org] AND sandi@copious.co.uk > > Also note that the agenda for 18 February is updated at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/#agenda and as promised we have other work for > you for today, including: > * http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2011JanMar/0002.html > * http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2011JanMar/0003.html > > Thanks! > > ~Shawn > -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ | WAI International Program Office Activity Lead | W3C Evaluation & Repair Tools Working Group Chair |
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