RE: Checkpoint 3.3 Editorial Suggestion

Good edit
It also comes closer to what we actually want. 
This guideline looks at more than just writing now.

 
Gregg


From John M Slatin



Another editorial suggestion: delete the phrase "is written to be"

Current wording: "Content is written to be no more complex than
necessary ... "

Proposed wording: "Content is no more complex than necessary ..."

Rationale: proposed wording comes a little closer to meeting its own
standard.
John

Received on Thursday, 10 July 2003 12:40:09 UTC