[adding public-eo-archive@w3.org for visibility and tracking] On Fri, Sep 22, 2017 at 1:09 PM, Sinclair, Norah M < norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu> wrote: > Hello Review Team, > > > > Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review > and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How > People with Disabilities Use the Web.” > > > > The goals of the revisions are to: > • Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut > Sentences. > • Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate. > Suggest graphics. > • Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements. > > Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51> > > Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2nd by > commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not > been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed. > Thanks so much for your assistance with this. > > Regards, > Norah > > > *Norah Sinclair * > Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist > > AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center > Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design > 512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318 > <https://maps.google.com/?q=512+Means+Street+%7C+Suite+250+%7C+Atlanta,+GA+30318&entry=gmail&source=g> > > > phone 404.894.7432 <(404)%20894-7432> > www.amacusg.org >Received on Tuesday, 26 September 2017 15:12:59 UTC
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