Re: How People with Disabilities Use the Web - correction

My apologies. I accidentally sent this email to the entire EO email list. It was intended for Sharron, James, Shawn, Jesus, Shadi, Sylvie, and Brent. Sorry about that.


Thank you,

Norah


Norah Sinclair
Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist

AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center
Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design
512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318

phone 404.894.7432
www.amacusg.org<http://www.amacusg.org/>


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From: Sinclair, Norah M <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu>
Sent: Friday, September 22, 2017 2:09 PM
To: Sharron Rush; jgreen@visa.com; shawn@w3.org; Pulido, Jesus
Cc: shadi@w3.org; Sylvie Duchateau; Bakken, Brent; EOWG (E-mail)
Subject: How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web users ready for review


Hello Review Team,



Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How People with Disabilities Use the Web.”



The goals of the revisions are to:
• Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut Sentences.
• Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate. Suggest graphics.
• Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements.

Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories<https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51>

Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2nd by commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed. Thanks so much for your assistance with this.

Regards,
Norah


Norah Sinclair
Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist

AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center
Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design
512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318

phone 404.894.7432
www.amacusg.org<http://www.amacusg.org/>