- From: Roberto Castaldo <r.castaldo@iol.it>
- Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 12:18:21 +0200
- To: <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hi all, I've just read the last "Introduction to Web Accessibility" version In section "What is Web accessibility", second paragraph 1. Current Wording: "Web accessibility addresses all disabilities, including visual, auditory, physical, speech, cognitive, and neurological disabilities." 2. Concerns: the list of disabilities doesn't seem to be exaustive 3. Suggestion for revision: If the EO group has decided to list the most important kinds of disabilities, why not including the technological ones? It's a kind of disability which is widely diffuse all over the world, and gives many problems in using the Web. My proposed wording: ""Web accessibility addresses all kinds of disabilities, including visual, auditory, physical, speech, cognitive, neurological and technological disabilities." -------------------------------------- In the same section, third paragraph: 1. Current Wording: "Flexibility benefits all people who use the Web, including people without disabilities who have different preferences, people with temporary disabilities (such as a broken arm), and older people" 2. Concerns: Technological problems should be presented in this paragraph as a real source of disability; slow connections are widely diffused, so they represent a good and a simple example 3. Suggestion for revision: My proposed wording: "Flexibility benefits all people who use the Web, including people without disabilities who have different preferences, people with tecnological or temporary disabilities (such as a slow connection or a broken arm), and older people" Best regards, Roberto Castaldo ----------------------------------- www.Webaccessibile.Org coordinator IWA/HWG Member rcastaldo@webaccessibile.org r.castaldo@iol.it Mobile 348 3700161 Icq 178709294 -----------------------------------
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