- From: Alan Chuter <achuter@teleservicios.com>
- Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 11:02:36 +0200
- To: "EOWG" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Perhaps an explanaion of the reason for the document would be useful at the beginning, for example: "WCAG consists of a series of inter-related documents. While this structure reduces redundancy and enables the reader to focus on one aspect [or some other rationale] it can be confusing to non-experts. This page attempts to explain the relationships between the documents and assist in navigating among them." WCAG doesn't actually mention the "Techniques Gateway", rather the links are just "Techniques for checkpoint X". Maybe this needs explaining. Perhaps the priority explanation ("Each checkpoint is assigned a priority...") can be removed to keep the document shorter. The checklist is perhaps easy to understand, and doesn't need explaining here. This page is very long-winded; I wonder whether people will have the patience to read something so long and complicated. I feel that the text examples dominate the page and make it overwhelming and obscure the pathway that it tries to illustrate. I wonder whether this could be explained more clearly by a real-world scenario. For example the designer has something that doesn't comply with a checkpoint and follow the path through the documents to reach specific technique. regards, Alan Chuter achuter@teleservicios.com
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