- From: Pat Hayes <phayes@ai.uwf.edu>
- Date: Thu, 20 Sep 2001 16:43:30 -0500
- To: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>
- Cc: w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org
>My comments on > http://www.coginst.uwf.edu/~phayes/RDF%20MT-currentdraft.html > Sep 20 18:44:21 2001 GMT > >Summary: I'm happy for this to be published as a draft. > >Detail: > >4. RDFS Interpretations > >6th paragraph: > "The subsets referred to in subPropertyOf are sets of pairs." >and subsets in subClassOf? Er .... subsets? The point of the remark was just to remind nonmathematical readers that a relational extension is a set of pairs, so a subrelation is a subset. If it's confusing, maybe it would be best omitted. >6. RDF containers > >1st paragraph >2nd sentence too long for me to read! Can you split into something like >this? OK, will do. > > A container is a resource which is a member of one of three subclasses > rdf:Bag, rdf:Seq or rdf:Alt of the class rdfs:Container. > This class is the domain of a countable set of properties indicated > by rdf:_1, rdf:_2, etc., all of which in turn are members of the > class rdfs:ContainerMembershipProperty. > >Before publication there are some minor things that should be done >apart from the other W3 style, checking: > > (Remove all the removed, added parts and styles) Will do. At this stage it needs cleaning up. > > Add anchors to all things that might want to be pointed to, such as > the lemmas. At present they are e.g. > <strong id="mergelem">Merging lemma.</strong> > best to be something like > <a name="mergelem" id="mergelem"><strong>Merging lemma.</strong></a> OK, will do. (But what is the point of adding anchors which aren't used? If this is obvious, never mind. I'm an HTML newbie.) > Hyperlinks to the N-Triples terms e.g. uriref, bNode in the test > cases doc. such as > http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-rdf-testcases-20010912/#uriref Will do. Ah, this answers the previous question, right? Never mind..... > A reference section in W3 style Oh, whoops, I forgot that. (Though isn't a bit passé to have a references section in hypertext? Seems a bit like putting a whip-caddy on a horseless carriage. Oh well, go with the flow. ) >and [CITE] for RDF M&S, RDFS, > Test-Cases, N-Triples section in test-cases, anything else. Maybe > normative, non-normative ones if they help. I don't follow this last point, I'm afraid. > > Very minor point - appendixes usually labelled A, B in w3 docs I've > looked at? OK, will do. Pat -- --------------------------------------------------------------------- IHMC (850)434 8903 home 40 South Alcaniz St. (850)202 4416 office Pensacola, FL 32501 (850)202 4440 fax phayes@ai.uwf.edu http://www.coginst.uwf.edu/~phayes
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