- From: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>
- Date: Thu, 20 Sep 2001 21:11:10 +0100
- To: Pat Hayes <phayes@ai.uwf.edu>
- cc: w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org
My comments on
http://www.coginst.uwf.edu/~phayes/RDF%20MT-currentdraft.html
Sep 20 18:44:21 2001 GMT
Summary: I'm happy for this to be published as a draft.
Detail:
4. RDFS Interpretations
6th paragraph:
"The subsets referred to in subPropertyOf are sets of pairs."
and subsets in subClassOf?
6. RDF containers
1st paragraph
2nd sentence too long for me to read! Can you split into something like
this?
A container is a resource which is a member of one of three subclasses
rdf:Bag, rdf:Seq or rdf:Alt of the class rdfs:Container.
This class is the domain of a countable set of properties indicated
by rdf:_1, rdf:_2, etc., all of which in turn are members of the
class rdfs:ContainerMembershipProperty.
Before publication there are some minor things that should be done
apart from the other W3 style, checking:
(Remove all the removed, added parts and styles)
Add anchors to all things that might want to be pointed to, such as
the lemmas. At present they are e.g.
<strong id="mergelem">Merging lemma.</strong>
best to be something like
<a name="mergelem" id="mergelem"><strong>Merging lemma.</strong></a>
Hyperlinks to the N-Triples terms e.g. uriref, bNode in the test
cases doc. such as
http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-rdf-testcases-20010912/#uriref
A reference section in W3 style and [CITE] for RDF M&S, RDFS,
Test-Cases, N-Triples section in test-cases, anything else. Maybe
normative, non-normative ones if they help.
Very minor point - appendixes usually labelled A, B in w3 docs I've
looked at?
Great work
Dave
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