Are we done with draft-hoffman-ftp-uri-02.txt?

In a previous message, I said:

>I updated the "ftp" draft to reflect the discussion on the list; it 
>is now available as draft-hoffman-ftp-uri-02.txt. I think I got it 
>right, but having folks review it would be great. Is it done, or did 
>I mess up, or did I get it right but it could use more explanation?
>  . . .
>	Title		: The ftp URI Scheme
>	Author(s)	: P. Hoffman
>	Filename	: draft-hoffman-ftp-uri-02.txt
>	Pages		: 5
>	Date		: 2004-10-21
>
>A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hoffman-ftp-uri-02.txt

It would be grand to hear if anyone has any further refinements that 
they want made to this draft in the next few weeks.

--Paul Hoffman, Director
--Internet Mail Consortium