RE: Agenda for XML Core WG telcon of 2004 October 13

Nit on nit:  actually, the comma should be added where it's missing.
 
A comma should precede a conjunction separating independent clauses:
declaration matches ..., and content consists ....
 
paul


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	From: public-xml-core-wg-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-xml-core-wg-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Glenn Marcy
	Sent: Tuesday, 12 October, 2004 14:15
	To: public-xml-core-wg@w3.org
	Subject: Re: Agenda for XML Core WG telcon of 2004 October 13
	
	

	> We have an XML Core WG phone call scheduled for Wednesday, 
	> Ocotber 13, from 
	
	I have a meeting before the call that has a good chance of 
	running over time, so I'm sending regrets in case it runs 
	way over, otherwise I'll just be late to the call. 
	
	> ACTION to Glenn:  Propose corrected wording in email. 
	
	The declaration matches Mixed and the content (after replacing 
	any entity references with their replacement text) consists of 
	character data<add>, including CDATA sections</add>, comments, 
	PIs and child elements whose types match names in the content 
	model. 
	
	The declaration matches ANY<del>,</del> and the content (after 
	replacing any entity references with their replacement text) 
	consists of character data<add>, including CDATA sections, 
	comments, PIs</add> and child elements whose types have been 
	declared. 
	
	Nit: I added the change to strike the comma after ANY since it 
	is inconsistent with the other text in the same constraint. 
	
	Regards, 
	Glenn