- From: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
- Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2011 17:46:01 -0400
- To: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
- Cc: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>, public-xg-lld@w3.org
On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 11:41:51PM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote: > >>OK, I've tried it in > >>http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6212&oldid=6141 > >>(be careful, this diff includes quite some other changes, including a couple by Tom...) > > > >This pulls the two points together into one coherent point > >quite efficiently. Nicely done! > > > >One minor stylistic suggestion: > > > > s/especially, changes/in particular, that changes/ > > This reminds me too much of not elegant French constructions, I could not have thought of that :-) > But if you think that's alright, feel free to implement it! DONE [1]... [1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6213&oldid=6212
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