- From: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
- Date: Mon, 05 Sep 2011 23:41:51 +0200
- To: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
- CC: public-xg-lld@w3.org
On 9/5/11 11:27 PM, Tom Baker wrote: > On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 11:16:57PM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote: >> OK, I've tried it in >> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6212&oldid=6141 >> (be careful, this diff includes quite some other changes, including a couple by Tom...) > > This pulls the two points together into one coherent point > quite efficiently. Nicely done! > > One minor stylistic suggestion: > > s/especially, changes/in particular, that changes/ This reminds me too much of not elegant French constructions, I could not have thought of that :-) But if you think that's alright, feel free to implement it! Antoine
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