RE: snapshot review

I believe this is the issue that caused it: 
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6725

thanks
-Doug
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Geoff Bullen <Geoff.Bullen@microsoft.com> 
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05/26/2009 01:12 PM

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Gilbert Pilz <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>, "public-ws-resource-access@w3.org" 
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Subject
RE: snapshot review






Just adding one extra editorial issue / question :
 
Eventing Spec: Section 3.4 ? Terminology
 
Old Version says:
Subscription Manager 
A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, 
and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.
 
New version says:
Subscription Manager 
A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, 
and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source. 
I do not understand which WG issue changed ?manage? into ?create? ? but 
create does not seem accurate in describing the functionality of a 
Subscription Manager, in that a subscribe message (a ?create?) is sent to 
the event source and the subscription manager is returned as part of the 
subscribe response.
 
I am sure we can discuss this today and resolve very quickly.
--Geoff
 
 
From: public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org 
[mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Gilbert 
Pilz
Sent: Friday, May 15, 2009 4:10 PM
To: public-ws-resource-access@w3.org
Subject: snapshot review
 
On reviewing the snapshots I found the following editorial nits:

WS-T, Section 2.5: The sentence beginning "Specifically, a compliant SOAP 
Node"; the 'Specifically' seems to be a hold-over from this sentence's 
previous location. Suggest removing this word.

WS-RT, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web Services 
Resource Transfer namespace URI/

WS-Eventing, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web 
Services Eventing namespace URI/

- gp