RE: snapshot review

Just adding one extra editorial issue / question :

Eventing Spec: Section 3.4 – Terminology

Old Version says:
Subscription Manager
A Web service that accepts requests to manage get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.

New version says:
Subscription Manager
A Web service that accepts requests to create, get the status of, renew, and/or delete subscriptions on behalf of an event source.
I do not understand which WG issue changed “manage” into “create” – but create does not seem accurate in describing the functionality of a Subscription Manager, in that a subscribe message (a “create”) is sent to the event source and the subscription manager is returned as part of the subscribe response.

I am sure we can discuss this today and resolve very quickly.
--Geoff


From: public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Gilbert Pilz
Sent: Friday, May 15, 2009 4:10 PM
To: public-ws-resource-access@w3.org
Subject: snapshot review

On reviewing the snapshots I found the following editorial nits:

WS-T, Section 2.5: The sentence beginning "Specifically, a compliant SOAP Node"; the 'Specifically' seems to be a hold-over from this sentence's previous location. Suggest removing this word.

WS-RT, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web Services Resource Transfer namespace URI/

WS-Eventing, Section 3.3: s/Web Services Transfer namespace URI/Web Services Eventing namespace URI/

- gp