[Bug 3982] [Guidelines] The introduction should state that the document only targets policy assertion authors

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3982

           Summary: [Guidelines] The introduction should state that the
                    document only targets policy assertion authors
           Product: WS-Policy
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Guidelines
        AssignedTo: fsasaki@w3.org
        ReportedBy: Daniel.Roth@microsoft.com
         QAContact: public-ws-policy-qa@w3.org


Title: [Guidelines] The introduction should state that the document only
targets policy assertion authors

Description: The introduction to the Guidelines document currently contains a
bulleted list to describe the target audience [1].  This list includes policy
expression authors, policy assertion authors, consumers and providers.  The
document is intended to provide guidance for assertion authors; the additional
target audiences should be removed.

Justification: The introduction to the Guidelines document should be clear
about who the content is relevant to.  

Target: Guidelines for Assertion Authors

Proposal: Remove the unnecessary bullet points and rewrite the third to last
paragraph in the introduction as shown in the attachment

[1]
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html?rev=1.8&content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#introduction

Received on Saturday, 18 November 2006 01:21:24 UTC