- From: Valentina Presutti <presutti@cs.unibo.it>
- Date: Mon, 28 Nov 2005 16:31:18 +0100
- To: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hpl.hp.com>
- Cc: public-swbp-wg@w3.org
Dear Jeremy, thanks for you comments. On Nov 15, 2005, at 5:43 PM, Jeremy Carroll wrote: > > A few comments that I hope may be helpful. > In fact, they are.. :) > 1. The statements about how to do the conversion in say 3.3.1 and > 3.3.2 starting "In particular" are very painful procedural > descriptions. Please use declarative language, and it will be > easier to understand and to critique. > Accepted. The way we describe the translation in the current draft is just a temporary approach before we settle on a formalism to use for this. By the way, I'll fix the "informal description" as soon as possible by using a declarative language. > 2. I suggest moving the unguided translation as out of scope of > this document. It would make it an easier document to write, and > hence to get out the door. Of course, unguided would be better in > some ways, but ... that could be in a follow up doc. > Accepted. It's a good idea, we would have the chance of releasing this first document before the end of the WG. > 3. Obviously there are many unused references which will need > pruning before a final version > Accepted, I'll fix it. Many thanks. Best regards, Valentina
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