- From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hpl.hp.com>
- Date: Tue, 15 Nov 2005 16:43:10 +0000
- To: public-swbp-wg@w3.org
A few comments that I hope may be helpful. 1. The statements about how to do the conversion in say 3.3.1 and 3.3.2 starting "In particular" are very painful procedural descriptions. Please use declarative language, and it will be easier to understand and to critique. 2. I suggest moving the unguided translation as out of scope of this document. It would make it an easier document to write, and hence to get out the door. Of course, unguided would be better in some ways, but ... that could be in a follow up doc. 3. Obviously there are many unused references which will need pruning before a final version Jeremy
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