Re: [SE] Draft Note - Initial changes following first informal meeting at tech plenary

Phil and all,

The merged version is now available at 

http://dl-web.man.ac.uk/~panz/swse/ODA11.htm

Greetings,
Jeff

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Dr. Jeff Z. Pan  ( http://DL-Web.man.ac.uk/ )
School of Computer Science, The University of Manchester



----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Phil Tetlow" <philip.tetlow@uk.ibm.com>
To: "Jeff Pan" <pan@cs.man.ac.uk>; "Daniel Oberle" <oberle@aifb.uni-karlsruhe.de>; "Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Cc: <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>
Sent: Wednesday, March 02, 2005 4:35 PM
Subject: Re: [SE] Draft Note - Initial changes following first informal meeting at tech plenary


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> Jeff, Daniel...all
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> Attached is a copy of the SE draft containing material (inc Mike Uschold's
> comments) that Evan, Mike, Tom, Bill and I discussed over dinner yesterday
> evening. It also includes the examples material you posted earlier today.
> To make life easier Ive marked the changes in red, but please excuse typos
> and spelling - Ive rather rushed out this version.
> 
> I would obviously be most interested to hear your comments
> 
> Jeff any chance you could check this version in relation to the version
> that you posted on the web this morning?... Thanks
> 
> Jeremy Carroll has also passed some comments on the way that the document
> is structured. It appears that we, at the very least, have some issues
> around Further Reading/References etc. I would be grateful, therefore, if
> Jeremy could also help us out here.
> 
> Kind regards
> 
> (See attached file: ODA and SWSE (Editors Draft) ver1.1.htm)
> 
> Phil Tetlow
> Senior Consultant
> IBM Business Consulting Services
> Mobile. (+44) 7740 923328

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