- From: Jeff Pan <pan@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 2 Mar 2005 17:17:34 -0000
- To: "Phil Tetlow" <philip.tetlow@uk.ibm.com>
- Cc: <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>, "Daniel Oberle" <oberle@aifb.uni-karlsruhe.de>, "Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Phil and all, The merged version is now available at http://dl-web.man.ac.uk/~panz/swse/ODA11.htm Greetings, Jeff -- Dr. Jeff Z. Pan ( http://DL-Web.man.ac.uk/ ) School of Computer Science, The University of Manchester ----- Original Message ----- From: "Phil Tetlow" <philip.tetlow@uk.ibm.com> To: "Jeff Pan" <pan@cs.man.ac.uk>; "Daniel Oberle" <oberle@aifb.uni-karlsruhe.de>; "Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com> Cc: <public-swbp-wg@w3.org> Sent: Wednesday, March 02, 2005 4:35 PM Subject: Re: [SE] Draft Note - Initial changes following first informal meeting at tech plenary > > > > > Jeff, Daniel...all > > Attached is a copy of the SE draft containing material (inc Mike Uschold's > comments) that Evan, Mike, Tom, Bill and I discussed over dinner yesterday > evening. It also includes the examples material you posted earlier today. > To make life easier Ive marked the changes in red, but please excuse typos > and spelling - Ive rather rushed out this version. > > I would obviously be most interested to hear your comments > > Jeff any chance you could check this version in relation to the version > that you posted on the web this morning?... Thanks > > Jeremy Carroll has also passed some comments on the way that the document > is structured. It appears that we, at the very least, have some issues > around Further Reading/References etc. I would be grateful, therefore, if > Jeremy could also help us out here. > > Kind regards > > (See attached file: ODA and SWSE (Editors Draft) ver1.1.htm) > > Phil Tetlow > Senior Consultant > IBM Business Consulting Services > Mobile. (+44) 7740 923328
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