Jeff, Daniel...all Attached is a copy of the SE draft containing material (inc Mike Uschold's comments) that Evan, Mike, Tom, Bill and I discussed over dinner yesterday evening. It also includes the examples material you posted earlier today. To make life easier Ive marked the changes in red, but please excuse typos and spelling - Ive rather rushed out this version. I would obviously be most interested to hear your comments Jeff any chance you could check this version in relation to the version that you posted on the web this morning?... Thanks Jeremy Carroll has also passed some comments on the way that the document is structured. It appears that we, at the very least, have some issues around Further Reading/References etc. I would be grateful, therefore, if Jeremy could also help us out here. Kind regards (See attached file: ODA and SWSE (Editors Draft) ver1.1.htm) Phil Tetlow Senior Consultant IBM Business Consulting Services Mobile. (+44) 7740 923328
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