Re: PROV-DM check

Thank you Simon,  these are now fixed

-Paolo

On 13/04/2013 12:13, Miles, Simon wrote:
> Luc, Paolo,
>
> I've finished checking PROV-DM with the following minor errors found:
>
> Section 2.2.1.2, paragraph above Example 12:
>   "There exist no prescriptive requirement" -> "requirements"
>
> Section 2.3, Table 3:
>   "about relations linking entities referring the same thing" -> "referring to the same thing"
>
> Section 4.1:
>   Figure 2 shows activity edit1 to have "type=editing", but the PROV-N in the text says "type=edit"
>
> Section 5.2.4, 2nd paragraph:
>  "It the reason" -> "It is the reason"
>
> Section 5.3, 1st paragraph:
>  "the relations WasAttributedTo (Attribution), WasAssociatedWith (Association), ActedOnBehalfOf (Delegation)" -> missing "and"
> before "ActedOnBehalfOf"
>
> Section 5.3, 1st paragraph:
>  "SofwareAgent" -> "SoftwareAgent"
>
> Section 5.3, 1st paragraph:
>  "Organization" has no hyperlink to its definition, unlike "Plan", "Person" and "SoftwareAgent"
>
> Section 5.3.5, 4th paragraph:
>  "Usage" is capitalised, while no other relation is
>
> Section 5.5.2, Example 45:
>  "They are both specialization" -> "specializations"
>
> Section 5.6.2, 1st sentence:
>  "A membership relation is defined the members of a Collection to be stated." -> ?? "defined for the members"?
>
> Appendix A, Table 10:
>  The hyperlinks for "Component 4: Bundles" and "Component 5: Alternate" are switched
>
> thanks,
> Simon
>
> Dr Simon Miles
> Senior Lecturer, Department of Informatics
> Kings College London, WC2R 2LS, UK
> +44 (0)20 7848 1166
>  
> Modelling the Provenance of Data in Autonomous Systems:
> http://eprints.dcs.kcl.ac.uk/1264/


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