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Re: Typos in PROV-N

From: Paolo Missier <Paolo.Missier@ncl.ac.uk>
Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2013 21:57:03 +0100
Message-ID: <516F0C9F.8050508@ncl.ac.uk>
To: "Huynh T.D." <tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
CC: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>, "public-prov-wg@w3.org" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
thank you Dong for spotting these -- fixed now.

Regards,
  -Paolo

On 15/04/2013 15:07, Huynh T.D. wrote:
> Luc, Paolo,
>
> The typos in PROV-N document I found are detailed below.
> Best regards,
>
> Dong.
>
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#purpose
> A full stop is needed at the end of the 2nd bullet point.
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_15
> In the last two expressions, the identifier (i) was given without a prefix, which I felt a bit inconsistent with the previous examples. However, I understand that this might be intentional.
> Same for the following examplesm e.g. start, end, etc.
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_16
> "..., and [ex:param="a"] are optional attributes." - singular here? Same for several other examples (Examples 12, 13, 14, 17, 18, ...) Please check.
>
> It'd be more natural to place Example 26 (https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_26) before Example 25, right after the sentence about prov:Plan (and perhaps use ex:pl1 in Example 25).
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-bundle-constructor
> The first row in the table is incorrect id -> identifier (i.e. not optional)
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_30
> "...as an an entity..." - delete the extra "an"
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-identifier
> "...more permissive syntax then XML..." -> "than"
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#document
> "Given its status of house keeping construct..." - "house-keeping" (to be consistent with the previous occurrence of the term). "Housekeeping" is a valid word by the way.
>
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_45
> Commas suggested around "for instance" in the last sentence.
>
> --
> Dr T Dong Huynh
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>
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