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Typos in PROV-N

From: Huynh T.D. <tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Date: Mon, 15 Apr 2013 14:07:04 +0000
To: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>, "paolo.missier@ncl.ac.uk" <paolo.missier@ncl.ac.uk>
CC: "public-prov-wg@w3.org" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
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Luc, Paolo,

The typos in PROV-N document I found are detailed below.
Best regards,

Dong.


https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#purpose
A full stop is needed at the end of the 2nd bullet point.

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_15
In the last two expressions, the identifier (i) was given without a prefix, which I felt a bit inconsistent with the previous examples. However, I understand that this might be intentional.
Same for the following examplesm e.g. start, end, etc.

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_16
"..., and [ex:param="a"] are optional attributes." - singular here? Same for several other examples (Examples 12, 13, 14, 17, 18, ...) Please check.

It'd be more natural to place Example 26 (https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_26) before Example 25, right after the sentence about prov:Plan (and perhaps use ex:pl1 in Example 25).

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-bundle-constructor
The first row in the table is incorrect id -> identifier (i.e. not optional)

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_30
"...as an an entity..." - delete the extra "an"

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-identifier
"...more permissive syntax then XML..." -> "than"

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#document
"Given its status of house keeping construct..." - "house-keeping" (to be consistent with the previous occurrence of the term). "Housekeeping" is a valid word by the way.

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_45
Commas suggested around "for instance" in the last sentence.

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