Luc, I'm suspecting that I should not directly edit the file, so I list the issues I found in the PROV-N document below: * 2.5 first paragraph o aslo: also o Activites: Activities * Example 10: speciy * 3.4.1: occuring -> occurring * 3.7.1: A space is needed between the last "Note:" and "The" (after Example 37) and again in 3.7.3 * 3.7.3: non terminals -> non-terminals? * 3.7.4: redeclare -> re-declare (as in the next sentence) * 6, Security considerations: mappeable -> mappable * A, ISSUE 496: toplevel -> top-level I'll do another pass a bit later. Dong. -- Dr T Dong Huynh Research Fellow Web and Internet Science Research Group Tel: +44 (0) 23 8059 3270 School of Electronics and Computer Science Fax: +44 (0) 23 8059 2783 University of Southampton Eml: tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk<mailto:tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk> Southampton, SO17 1BJ, UK. -----Original Message----- From: Luc Moreau [mailto:l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk] Sent: 21 November 2012 12:59 To: public-prov-wg@w3.org Subject: prov-dm, prov-n, prov-constraints preliminary staging Hi all, Given that our CR-track documents should be frozen by Monday, it would be useful to have a few pairs of eyes checking the preliminary staged versions of the specs. http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-dm-20121211/Overview.html http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-n-20121211/Overview.html http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/Overview.html Known issues: - text about CR exit criteria, implementation report, etc needs to be added to intro. - documents use dated URL where they will be published, so dangling links. Can you let us know if you can spare a few minutes glancing at the documents, providing any feedback on potential bugs and/or typos. Luc PS. I am not aware that prov-o is ready yet -- Professor Luc Moreau Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk<mailto:l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk> United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavmReceived on Friday, 23 November 2012 11:34:53 GMT
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