RE: prov-dm, prov-n, prov-constraints preliminary staging

Luc,

I'm suspecting that I should not directly edit the file, so I list the issues I found in the PROV-N document below:

*         2.5 first paragraph

o   aslo: also

o   Activites: Activities

*         Example 10: speciy

*         3.4.1: occuring  -> occurring

*         3.7.1: A space is needed between the last "Note:" and "The" (after Example 37) and again in 3.7.3

*         3.7.3: non terminals -> non-terminals?

*         3.7.4: redeclare -> re-declare (as in the next sentence)

*         6, Security considerations: mappeable -> mappable

*         A, ISSUE 496: toplevel -> top-level
I'll do another pass a bit later.

Dong.
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-----Original Message-----
From: Luc Moreau [mailto:l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk]
Sent: 21 November 2012 12:59
To: public-prov-wg@w3.org
Subject: prov-dm, prov-n, prov-constraints preliminary staging





Hi all,



Given that our CR-track documents should be frozen by Monday, it would be useful to have a few pairs of eyes checking the preliminary staged versions of the specs.



http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-dm-20121211/Overview.html

http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-n-20121211/Overview.html

http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/Overview.html



Known issues:

- text about CR exit criteria, implementation report, etc needs to be added to intro.

- documents use dated URL where they will be published, so dangling links.



Can you let us know if you can spare a few minutes glancing at the documents, providing any feedback on potential bugs and/or typos.



Luc



PS. I am not aware that prov-o is ready yet





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