Re: PROV-ISSUE-208 (TLebo): "5.4.2 Record Container" is misleading [prov-dm]

Hi Tim,

I have implemented both suggestions.
See http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/rev/a551e9259b8d

I am closing the issue, pending review.
Regards,
Luc

On 01/03/2012 08:15 PM, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote:
> PROV-ISSUE-208 (TLebo): "5.4.2 Record Container" is misleading [prov-dm]
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> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/208
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> Raised by: Timothy Lebo
> On product: prov-dm
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> "5.4.2 Record Container" is misleading about what a record container may contain.
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> The current writeup could make the section more consumable with:
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> Suggestion 1:
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> Add link to http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/ProvenanceModel.html#PROV-DM-record from within section "5.4.2 Record Container" to guide reader to what a "record" is according to the ASN grammar.
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> Suggestion 2:
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> Add a "non Account" record in the example shown in section "5.4.2 Record Container" to emphasize that provenance containers hold (more general) _records_ and not _just_ account records.
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> Thanks,
> Tim
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