Re: Primer staged

Tiny comments:

- in the abstract, please make the reference to the Overview an active link
  http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-overview-20121211/

- in the status section, bullet items on the document, you should avoid circular references; for the primer line in the bullet list it should say '(this document)'

Ivan

On Dec 2, 2012, at 12:31 , Miles, Simon wrote:

> Hello,
> 
> The primer has been staged and verified, with updated figures using the new style guidelines.
> 
> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/primer/WD-prov-primer-20121211/Overview.html
> 
> thanks,
> Simon
> 
> Dr Simon Miles
> Senior Lecturer, Department of Informatics
> Kings College London, WC2R 2LS, UK
> +44 (0)20 7848 1166
>  
> Determining the trustworthiness of new electronic contracts:
> http://eprints.dcs.kcl.ac.uk/1341/


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