Re: [Action-422] Editorial pass from Arle

Thanks a lot for this, Arle. Just to clarify: of course everybody is 
encouraged to look at the edits and comment here, so we will schedule 
the edit not earlier than Thursday so that people have two days to take 
a look.

best,

Felix

Am 28.05.13 10:18, schrieb Arle Lommel:
> Hi all,
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> Attached is a Word file with my editorial changes to the ITS 2.0 spec. 
> I focused on sections 3 and later, although I marked some changes in 
> use of /which/ vs. /that/ in the first sections.
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> I've discussed with Felix and we would like to have one of the other 
> editors implement the changes in ODD as a double check on the edits.
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> I've also implemented changes to address ISSUE-126 in this file. The 
> changes went a bit further than I indicated earlier, but are better 
> examples than what I proposed. I also corrected one other mistake I 
> made in an example in the same table (a Hungarian term used as an 
> example) that shouldn't matter to anyone but me.
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> Best,
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> Arle
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