- From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Date: Tue, 27 Jan 2009 13:42:10 +0100
- To: Joseph A Holsten <joseph@josephholsten.com>
- CC: HTML WG <public-html@w3.org>, Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch>, Lachlan Hunt <lachlan.hunt@lachy.id.au>
Joseph A Holsten wrote: > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA1 > > I've posted the merged version of Lachlan and my drafts here: > http://josephholsten.com/about-uri-scheme/draft-holsten-about-uri-scheme.txt > > with inline comments and editing marks in html here: > http://josephholsten.com/about-uri-scheme/draft-holsten-about-uri-scheme.html > > and source control here: > http://github.com/josephholsten/about-uri-scheme/ > > My changes mostly amount to adding the required IANA and Security > Considerations sections. > ... Nits: - replace <organization>: N/A by an empty string - on the front page, note where feedback should go (IMHO the best place would be the IETF uri-review mailing list) - in the introduction, I'd remove the positioning vs URN: and TAG:, it's kind of subjective, and is not needed here - "abouturi = "about:" segment" - restricting to segment sounds good, but does this reflect reality? - "About URIs are always escaped, as per [RFC3986]" - that's kind of misleading; either remove it, or clarify what you mean by that. - "Acknowledgements" - move them behind IANA and Security Considerations > ... Best regards, Julian
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