Re: Which document to attack next?

Thank you Sharron!



Brent A. Bakken
Director, Accessibility Strategy & Education Services
Pearson

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On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 4:52 PM, Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org> wrote:

> Actually we decided that all of these documents - while having been
> checked for accuracy, current browser and technology references, and
> broken links - they all need tersification review.  Nearly all of them are
> too long and wordy.
>
> So Nic, I will prioritize these for your review as follows:
>
>    - The work on choosing tools with Laura - top priority
>
> After that, please ask Eric to put content in new skin and
> review for brevity, clarity, plain language, and active voice in this
> order:
>
>    - First Aid : Interim Repairs <https://www.w3.org/WAI/impl/Overview>
>    - Planning and Managing Guide <https://www.w3.org/WAI/impl/Overview>
>    (including sub pages)
>    - Involving Users  (web projects)
>    <https://www.w3.org/WAI/users/involving>
>    - Involving Users (evaluation) <https://www.w3.org/WAI/eval/users>
>    - Developing Organizational policies  <https://www.w3.org/WAI/impl/pol>this
>    one has a note to "address submitted comments" but I have no idea where
>    those comments might be.
>
> You can start by looking at Vicki's notes in the spreadsheet and let us
> know if you have any questions.
>
> Best,
> Sharron
>
>
>
>
> On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 3:34 PM, Bakken, Brent <brent.bakken@pearson.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Oh, Okay.
>>
>> Then until we check with Shawn for other updates she has completed, the
>> next ones are lower priority (only do when Nic has no other to attend to),
>> they are the tutorials (lines 14-19).
>> What do you think Sharron? Do those next when nothing else is ready?
>>
>> I will respond to Laura and Nic's "Selecting Eval Tools" right now so
>> that will be ready too.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Brent A. Bakken
>> Director, Accessibility Strategy & Education Services
>> Pearson
>>
>> 512 202 1087 <(512)%20202-1087>
>> brent.bakken@pearson.com
>>
>> Learn more at pearson.com
>>
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>>
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 3:23 PM, Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> He already completed edits on Contacting Orgs...needs review
>>>
>>> On Sep 13, 2017 3:17 PM, "Bakken, Brent" <brent.bakken@pearson.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Nic,
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for the email. Looking at the spreadsheet it looks like a lot of
>>>> them need Shawn to do some minor update first and then it is on to you. I
>>>> can follow up with Shawn about where she is on her step and get the
>>>> spreadsheet updated. I guess the next one you could tackle is the top on on
>>>> row 2 (Contacting Orgs about inaccessible Sites). Column G indicates that
>>>> one is ready for you.
>>>>
>>>> Also, just a heads up. We met this morning about the resource you and
>>>> Laura are working on, "Selecting Eval Tools". I have some feedback for the
>>>> plan that you two put together. I will be emailing that out to you and
>>>> Laura in a moment. Once you have that, the two of you can start working on
>>>> the edits to that resource as well. That will be highest priority for you.
>>>>
>>>> I hope this helps you out.
>>>> Talk to you soon,
>>>> Brent
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Brent A. Bakken
>>>> Director, Accessibility Strategy & Education Services
>>>> Pearson
>>>>
>>>> 512 202 1087 <(512)%20202-1087>
>>>> brent.bakken@pearson.com
>>>>
>>>> Learn more at pearson.com
>>>>
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>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 2:15 PM, Nic Steenhout <nic@knowbility.org>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hello Sharron, Brent,
>>>>>
>>>>> I was starting work on "Accessibility, Usability, and Inclusion", and
>>>>> was asking Eric Eggert about write access to the document in GitHub. After
>>>>> a bit of discussion and him checking in with Shawn, it appears that this
>>>>> document needs other edits before being touched.
>>>>>
>>>>> This leads me to wonder if perhaps I could get a list of which
>>>>> documents I should approach first?
>>>>>
>>>>> Does something like that already exist? The EOWG Resource Management
>>>>> spreadsheet in google docs I see doesn't have that indication (that I can
>>>>> see).
>>>>>
>>>>> Any assistance would be greatly appreciated.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you
>>>>>
>>>>> Nic
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>
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