Name: Harry Loots Email: harry.loots@ieee.org Affiliation: EPO Document: TD Item Number: G8 Part of Item: Applicability Comment Type: editorial Summary of Issue: Suggestion for grammatical improvement Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): Sentence described in proposed change contains grammatical error. See below: Proposed Change: Current text: An alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are. Suggested change: delete {An} insert {In an} New text: [begin add]In an[end add] [begin delete]An[end delete] alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are. Alternative to suggested change is to substitute [,] with [:]Received on Tuesday, 13 August 2013 09:42:55 UTC
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