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- Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2013 09:42:54 +0000
- To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org
Name: Harry Loots
Email: harry.loots@ieee.org
Affiliation: EPO
Document: TD
Item Number: G8
Part of Item: Applicability
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Suggestion for grammatical improvement
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Sentence described in proposed change contains grammatical error. See below:
Proposed Change:
Current text:
An alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are.
Suggested change:
delete {An}
insert {In an}
New text:
[begin add]In an[end add] [begin delete]An[end delete] alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are.
Alternative to suggested change is to substitute [,] with [:]
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