Re: FW: Content Usable Graphic to Review

Hi folks
I tried to edit the  mock up so that it addresses most of the issues other
than topography and contrast. It looks messy but the next step would be to
ask the designer to make it neat and look good again.. (i am not a
designer...)
I aimed for:

   - being able to find important things
   - knowing what things are and how to use them (buttons could still be
   clearer)
   - site heiraky (still needs some edits from John k)
   - clear getting started
   - plain background under text (I missed one place but the idea is there)
   - easier language


It would need work of course making it look nice again!

Do we feel this is close to the concept? Does it show best practice for
objectives or not yet?
If it is not close then I think we move it to the next version.
If it is close then we can ask John Kirkwood to edit the sub menu, and the
designer to put in Rain's comments and make it look professional. I cna
also mock up some failures.

[image: image.png]



On Thu, Feb 11, 2021 at 5:15 PM Delisi, Jennie (MNIT) <
jennie.delisi@state.mn.us> wrote:

> *From:* Delisi, Jennie (MNIT)
> *Sent:* Thursday, February 11, 2021 7:15 AM
> *To:* public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
> *Subject:* Content Usable Graphic to Review
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> Hello,
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> Here is the graphic we will be discussing during today’s meeting. I will
> attach it as a PDF (not tagged, just an image), put a screen shot of it
> below.
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> Here’s the text description of the image:
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> Banner area: (from left to right) logo with text Magnolia Flower Shop,
> with images of magnolias underneath; Shop; Delivery; Events; Contact Us;
> Search, magnifying glass icon, textbox; icon of a basket
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> Picture: various kinds of flowers in baskets
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> Heading: Flowers for Every Occasion
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> Text: The flowers from the Magnolia Flower Shop are locally sourced and
> fresh cut daily. We have freshly cut, delivery, special events and gifts.
> Our flowers are blooming for every occasion!
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> Picture background: Roses in bouquets.
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> Text overtop: Valentine’s day specials. Button: Shop now
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> Footer (pink background color): address; Social, with icons for Facebook,
> Twitter, Instagram; Subscribe to our newsletter with text box containing
> placeholder text enter your email address; flower pictures and copyright
> information
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> [image: Screenshot of the Magnolia Flower Shop website. Full description
> in email text.]
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> *Jennie Delisi*
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> Accessibility Analyst | Office of Accessibility
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