- From: Anthony Bryan <anthonybryan@gmail.com>
- Date: Sun, 7 Feb 2010 14:08:03 -0500
- To: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
I think apostrophes are typically used to show possession and contraction. OLD The individual values of the numeric status codes defined for HTTP/1.1, and an example set of corresponding Reason-Phrase's, are presented below. "first match winning" might be better as "first applicable being selected" or something? OLD To determine the URI of the resource a response is associated with, the following rules are used (first match winning): NEW To determine the URI of the resource a response is associated with, the following rules are used (with the first applicable one being selected): Is this mixing verb tenses? Should probably ask an English major, instead of going by me. :) OLD The request has been fulfilled and resulted in a new resource being created. NEW The request was fulfilled and resulted in a new resource being created. OR The request has been fulfilled and has resulted in a new resource being created. I am not sure if an individual working somewhere matters? OLD Such an event is common for limited-time, promotional services and for resources belonging to individuals no longer working at the server's site. NEW Such an event is common for limited-time, promotional services and for resources belonging to individuals no longer hosting content at the server's site. OR Such an event is common for limited-time, promotional services and for resources no longer hosted at the server's site. Double notification? OLD Note: Note to implementors: some deployed proxies are known to return 400 or 500 when DNS lookups time out. NEW Note to implementors: some deployed proxies are known to return 400 or 500 when DNS lookups time out. -- (( Anthony Bryan ... Metalink [ http://www.metalinker.org ] )) Easier, More Reliable, Self Healing Downloads
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