- From: Ed Simon <edsimon@xmlsec.com>
- Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2002 19:11:56 -0500
- To: <xml-encryption@w3.org>
Received on Wednesday, 27 February 2002 19:20:56 UTC
Here are my changes (mainly typos except for 3.5.1): Section 1.4: Change "Versign" to "VeriSign" Section 2.1: Align XML example properly Section 2.1.5: Change "can not" to "cannot" Section 3.5.1: For the paragraph starting with "CarriedKeyName is an optional element...", append the sentence "Note that because whitespace is significant in the value of the ds:KeyName element, whitespace is also significant in the value of the CarriedKeyName element". Section 5.9.1: Add a period to the end of the last paragraph. Regards, Ed ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ed Simon <edsimon@xmlsec.com> XMLsec Inc. Interested in XML Security Training and Consulting services? Visit "www.xmlsec.com".
Received on Wednesday, 27 February 2002 19:20:56 UTC