Re: Candidate Rec changes - Ed

Thanks Ed, tweaks are in:

  http://www.w3.org/Encryption/2001/Drafts/xmlenc-core/ 
  $Revision: 1.148 $ on $Date: 2002/02/28 17:36:21 $ GMT 

On Wednesday 27 February 2002 19:11, Ed Simon wrote:
> Here are my changes (mainly typos except for 3.5.1):
>
> Section 1.4:  Change "Versign" to "VeriSign"
>
> Section 2.1:  Align XML example properly
>
> Section 2.1.5: Change "can not" to "cannot"
>
> Section 3.5.1: For the paragraph starting with "CarriedKeyName is an
> optional element...", append the sentence "Note that because whitespace
> is significant in the value of the ds:KeyName element, whitespace is also
> significant in the value of the CarriedKeyName element".
>
> Section 5.9.1: Add a period to the end of the last paragraph.

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