- From: Christopher Ferris <chris.ferris@sun.com>
- Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2002 09:59:26 -0500
- To: xml-dist-app@w3.org
+1 Jean-Jacques Moreau wrote: > Mark, > > I suggest you update the introduction to match SOAP's reworded > abstract[1]. (The eds have tried to simplify a sentence from the > abstract that you reuse and that readers had had difficulties > with.) The revised text might look like: > > "SOAP 1.2 is an XML Infoset[INFOSET] based protocol > that defines an envelope and framework for describing > message contents and processing rules. It also > describes a transport binding framework which may be > used to exchange messages using an underlying transport > protocol." > > Also, in section 6, "The 'action' parameter", you refer to SOAP > 1.1. Do we really need this reference, i.e. can't we just > describe what the "action" parameter means for SOAP 1.2? > > Thank you, > > Jean-Jacques. > > [1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/10/11/soap12-part2.html > >
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