- From: Mark Baker <distobj@acm.org>
- Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2002 11:07:12 -0500 (EST)
- To: moreau@crf.canon.fr (Jean-Jacques Moreau)
- Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org
> Mark, > > I suggest you update the introduction to match SOAP's reworded > abstract[1]. (The eds have tried to simplify a sentence from the > abstract that you reuse and that readers had had difficulties > with.) The revised text might look like: > > "SOAP 1.2 is an XML Infoset[INFOSET] based protocol > that defines an envelope and framework for describing > message contents and processing rules. It also > describes a transport binding framework which may be > used to exchange messages using an underlying transport > protocol." How about you remind me about this when we've decided on the final text? Alternately, when we're ready to submit -01, I'll just take whatever we've got at that point. This is the kind of change that can be made at any point, even during the latter review stages, so there's no hurry. > Also, in section 6, "The 'action' parameter", you refer to SOAP > 1.1. Do we really need this reference, i.e. can't we just > describe what the "action" parameter means for SOAP 1.2? You're right. Gone. MB -- Mark Baker, Chief Science Officer, Planetfred, Inc. Ottawa, Ontario, CANADA. mbaker@planetfred.com http://www.markbaker.ca http://www.planetfred.com
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