- From: Ray Denenberg <rden@loc.gov>
- Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2001 09:36:18 -0500
- CC: xml-dist-app@w3.org
Yin Leng Husband wrote: > DS5 A sender wishes to reliably exchange data with a receiver. > It wishes to be notified of the disposition of the data > delivery to the receiver, i.e. > either 1) that data has been successfully delivered to > the receiver, > or 2) of any failure or possible failure of delivery to > the receiver. How about changing "i.e. either" to "for example", thus: DS5 A sender wishes to reliably exchange data with a receiver. It wishes to be notified of the disposition of the data delivery to the receiver, for example, 1) that data has been successfully delivered to the receiver, or 2) of any failure or possible failure of delivery to the receiver. -- Ray Denenberg Library of Congress rden@loc.gov 202-707-5795
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