- From: Hallam-Baker, Phillip <pbaker@verisign.com>
- Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2003 12:48:57 -0800
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First of a series I am working through the changes doing the editorial ones first. [Shivram] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Feb/0031.html <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Feb/0031.html> Changed paragraph 54 to read The response to a compound request is a compound response. A compound response consists of an outer response and zero or more inner responses. If the ResultMajor value of the outer response is xkms:success the compound response SHOULD contain an inner response response element corresponding to each inner request element of the compound request. If the the ResultMajor value of the outer response is not xkms:success the response MUST NOT contain any inner responses. If a compound response has an outer ResultMajor value xkms:success but does not contain a response corresponding to an inner request the ResultMajor value xkms:failure is assumed. <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Feb/0021.html> [Blair] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Feb/0021.html Change made in accordance with proposal Blair concurred with. [Loren]http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Mar/0005.html Changed ResultAbstractType to be concrete, defined result element and added following text: The PendingRequest element is used to request the result of a previously presented request for which the MajorResult code xkms:Pending was returned. The PendingRequest element inherits the element and attributes of AbstractRequestType and the following attribute: ResponseID [Optional] The value of the Id attribute sent in the original response containing the MajorResult code xkms:Pending. If the value of ResponseID is unknown to the service the result Sender.UnknownResponseId is returned. [Shivram]http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Feb/0022.html 1. Copyright to include year 2003 DONE 2. Line 507 of Section 10, link to "Contributor Policies" is linking to Encryption page. It must link to XKMS page[1] [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Contributor.html <http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Contributor.html> DONE 3. Please update the list of people as per: http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Participants.html <http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Participants.html> DONE - Added Loren Hart who posted to the list this month. 4. Could you please associate the following: Stephen Farrell, Baltimore (Co-Chair) Shivaram Mysore, Sun Microsystems (Co-Chair) DONE 5. Line 533 [WSSL] should be [WSDL] DONE 6 Line 532 URL should be hyperlinked. DONE 7. Line 536 Update dsig xsd url as - http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd <http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd> DONE 8. As a reminder: Line 522 needs contents. ISSUE - CREATE 9. Line 3 - Will need to change the status to more reasonable as "Last Call" ISSUE - LAST MINUTE - To Part II Protocol Bindings: 1. Fix last updated date to be the same as in Core Draft. DONE 2. Somewhere we had to acknowledge Merlin Hughes as one of the authors. DONE 3. Copyright to include year 2003 DONE 4. Section 6 Acknowledments missing content DONE 5. Remove line 107 - XTASS DONE 6. Fix line 109 to the right XML DSig schema definition - http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd <http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd> DONE 7. Fix line 110 to the latest recommendation of XML Encryption standard DONE 8. Line 106 [WSSL] should be [WSDL] DONE 9. Line 3 - Will need to change the status to more reasonable as "Lowards Last Call for Candidate Recommendation" ISSUE - LAST MINUTE 10. Line 90 /Section 4.6 still needs work ISSUE As in DSig and Encryption, it may be useful to move the Acknowledgment section to say Section 1.3 or 1.4 DONE Also add in a section on "Versions, Namespaces URIs, and Identifiers" as in the dsig and xenc core specs. ISSUE - Editorial
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