- From: Shivaram Mysore <Shivaram.Mysore@Sun.COM>
- Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2003 09:55:54 -0800 (PST)
- To: www-xkms@w3.org
Part 1:
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line no: description
2: s/proposed/
s/an anticipated/a
20: Schema URI in the table - what is the impact on the latest schema spec
21: Code snippet - fix content for <documentation /> tag
25: a reference to a definition of Trust, Trust Policy, Trust Model & Trust
Management would be very useful. The best is to write a sentence
regarding the same.
64: 2nd bullet <SignedInfo>/<CanonicalizationMethod> - Fix font and possibly
replace "/" in the above with something readable.
190: use of words/phrases - policy, implications of policy - may be suggesting
this as a example for future would be more appropriate. Also defining
policy is more useful.
Also in the same line, s/usekeywith/<UseKeyWith>
318: similar comments as 190
Part 2:
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1. update copyright year
2: same comment as in part 1 line 2
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Software Engineer Co-Chair, W3C's XKMS WG
Java Card Engineering http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS
JavaSoft, Sun Microsystems Inc.
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