- From: Shivaram Mysore <Shivaram.Mysore@Sun.COM>
- Date: Fri, 14 Feb 2003 18:45:21 -0800 (PST)
- To: www-xkms@w3.org, pbaker@verisign.com
Phill, Quick editorial notes on a few items: Core Draft: 1. Copyright to include year 2003 2. Line 507 of Section 10, link to "Contributor Policies" is linking to Encryption page. It must link to XKMS page[1] [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Contributor.html 3. Please update the list of people as per: http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Participants.html 4. Could you please associate the following: Stephen Farrell, Baltimore (Co-Chair) Shivaram Mysore, Sun Microsystems (Co-Chair) 5. Line 533 [WSSL] should be [WSDL] 6 Line 532 URL should be hyperlinked. 7. Line 536 Update dsig xsd url as - http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd 8. As a reminder: Line 522 needs contents. 9. Line 3 - Will need to change the status to more reasonable as "Last Call" Protocol Bindings: 1. Fix last updated date to be the same as in Core Draft. 2. Somewhere we had to acknowledge Merlin Hughes as one of the authors. 3. Copyright to include year 2003 4. Section 6 Acknowledments missing content 5. Remove line 107 - XTASS 6. Fix line 109 to the right XML DSig schema definition - http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/xmldsig-core-schema.xsd 7. Fix line 110 to the latest recommendation of XML Encryption standard 8. Line 106 [WSSL] should be [WSDL] 9. Line 3 - Will need to change the status to more reasonable as "Lowards Last Call for Candidate Recommendation" 10. Line 90 /Section 4.6 still needs work As in DSig and Encryption, it may be useful to move the Acknowledgment section to say Section 1.3 or 1.4 Also add in a section on "Versions, Namespaces URIs, and Identifiers" as in the dsig and xenc core specs. /Shivaram > Resent-Date: Thu, 13 Feb 2003 22:34:16 -0500 (EST) > Resent-Message-Id: <200302140334.h1E3YGL28138@frink.w3.org> > From: "Hallam-Baker, Phillip" <pbaker@verisign.com> > To: "Www-Xkms (E-mail)" <www-xkms@w3.org> > Date: Thu, 13 Feb 2003 19:34:02 -0800 > X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2600.0000 > Subject: Updated Drafts > X-Archived-At: http://www.w3.org/mid/CE541259607DE94CA2A23816FB49F4A310FF75@vhqpostal6.verisign .com > Resent-From: www-xkms@w3.org > X-Mailing-List: <www-xkms@w3.org> archive/latest/630 > X-Loop: www-xkms@w3.org > Resent-Sender: www-xkms-request@w3.org > List-Id: <www-xkms.w3.org> > List-Help: <http://www.w3.org/Mail/> > List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:www-xkms-request@w3.org?subject=unsubscribe> > ___________________________________________________________________________ Shivaram H. Mysore <shivaram.mysore@sun.com> Software Engineer Co-Chair, W3C's XKMS WG Java Card Engineering http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS JavaSoft, Sun Microsystems Inc. Direct: (408)276-7524 Fax: (408)276-7608 http://java.sun.com/people/shivaram (Internal: http://mysore.sfbay/) ___________________________________________________________________________
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