Re: Reference doc: cleanup version

Dan Connolly wrote:
> On Wed, 2003-01-22 at 07:01, Guus Schreiber wrote:
> 
>>When running the new examples in the Reference through ouur parser [1] I 
>>discovered many small errors. Sorry for not checking that before 
>>distributing. My Emacs cut-and-pasting worked poorly. I have attached 
>>the cleaned-up version.
> 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-webont-wg/2003Jan/att-0365/01-owl-ref-v151.html#Header
> 
> 
> At a glance, I still find it hard to reconcile statements like this...
> 
> "Thus any RDF graph forms an OWL ontology."
> 
> which appeals to me, with this...
> 
> "An OWL ontology consists of an optional ontology header and any number
> of class axioms, property axioms, and individual axioms."
> 
> which seems to be talking about an ontology as if it were
> a piece of XML syntax.

Slip of the pen. I replaced "OWL ontology" with "OWL document"m, which 
was what I actually meant. .

> Is an ontology header a part of the RDF graph?
> 
> Hmm...
> 
> "A ontology header component is represented with an instance of the
> class owl:Ontology"
> 
> Maybe I could get used to that.
> 
> But this bit is wrong/overly-constraining:
> 
> "which identifies the containing document".
> 
> I suggest changing to
> 	which typically identifies the containing document.
> 
> or even...
> 
> 	which typically identifies the containg document
> 	using a same-document reference [section 4.2
> 	of RFC2396].

Changed as suggested.

Guus


> 
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2396.txt
> 
> 
>>Mike will place it soon at its regular editor's draft spot.
>>
>>Guus
>>
>>[1] http://www.swi.psy.uva.nl/projects/SWI-Prolog/packages/sgml/online.html
> 
> 

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Received on Tuesday, 28 January 2003 09:44:52 UTC